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Book Review – Stage 3 by Ken Stark

Firstly, I know it’s been a while since my last post! Non-author life has got in the way in well, lots of different ways, but even though I’ve not been writing as much as I’d like of late, I have been continuing reading some amazing books by a variety of indie authors!

Now, what’s the point of reviewing an indie book from 2016, you may ask? Well, I admit, I’m posting this because I haven’t posted for a while but also to prove the point that indie books can be around for years before they pick up readers. That’s something that’s important to know for any indie author – your books can find their audience years after they are published and can certainly have a (book)shelf life longer than that coffee that keeps so many of us going!

So here I go, lurching along with the zombie hordes of Stage 3 by Ken Stark

Though I’m not zombie-mad, I’m a fan of the genre, playing Resident Evil doggedly over the years and keeping up with The Walking Dead and its various spin-offs. With that in mind, I wasn’t sure how a zombie novel would come across, having never read one before.

Stark throws the reader straight into the action but in an original way, which got me intrigued right from the start. Rather than going all-guns-blazing action from page one, which would be the tempting thing to do, he pulls the reader in, as the apocalypse begins and the world starts to unravel around our protagonist.

Speaking of which, he and the other characters are vivid, believable and human, as Stark expertly weaves their backstories and current narrative into some seriously bone-crunching action, through numerous set pieces that took me right back to my survival horror sofa days, game controller in hand, from tense, hand-to-hand alleyway encounters to multi-zombie vehicle mow-downs. Of course, not everything is back and white in post-apocalyptic San Francisco, and there’s also some less than scrupulous survivors that our protagonists Mace and Mac meet along the way.

Without giving too much away, Stark leaves us with a number of unanswered questions which set everything up neatly for book 2 which I’m really looking forward to reading!

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Grab a free summer read!

Ah, the summer. Lazy days languishing poolside, drink in one hand, book in the other…OK if you’re in England like me, that could well involve a thunderstorm or three and an alternative indoor location, but what the hey!! Wherever you are or are going to be, there’s nothing like knowing that you’ve set aside some time to relax with a book.

Whisper War is a Kindle-only publication, which means providing you have your Kindle with you or even the app on your phone, the wartime adventures of Eddie Bleakledge will always be at your fingertips! Eddie is mentioned in passing in my debut novella Whisper Wood and Whisper War is designed to work as a standalone story but there is something sinister linking the stories together…

Want to find out more? Well Whisper War will be available for free between August 1st and August 3rd right here, so make a note, or bookmark this blog and get on to some free book download joy in the middle of the holiday season!

After you’ve read Whisper War (and maybe even Whisper Wood too!) I’d be really grateful of your reviews, as they really do help self-published authors like me to get our stories out there.

Anyway, take care and have a sizzling summer!

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May I ask what you’re reading?

I’m not sure if it’s been the same where you live, but May has brought us some of the continuously warmest weather we’ve ever had here in the UK! For me, the sun is always synonymous with reading – there’s nothing like relaxing with a paperback outdoors with a cool (or warm – yes I’m that crazy!) drink and letting time take on a different meaning as the book’s narrative carries you away.

OK, I’m aware it doesn’t have to be a paperback. It could be a hardback. And, OK yes, a Kindle or Kindle app. Pretty remiss of me not to mention that format when it’s the one that I use to publish my stuff. But a paperback is always my go-to. That’s not to say I don’t read on my Kindle app – in fact, it’s my habit these days to always have a self-published book on the go on my phone so I can read it on my lunch, or if I’m ever waiting for public transport, or indeed, on said public transport, when I haven’t brought a book with me.

Maybe you’re a bit like me and do this already? It’s a great way to support indie authors like myself, but still work your way through the list of latest best-sellers or classics that are lining up on your bookshelf. So, get out there, get reading and get supporting!

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Halloween Whispers – for free!

Yes, it’s that time of year where your inbox, social media feeds and pretty much everything else are filled with talk of the spooky season, whether that be ‘spook-tacular deals’ or ‘frightfully good reads’. And while I’ve not yet written a horror story of such, there’s plenty of unsettling secrets to discover within the pages of Whisper Wood, which is why I’m giving it away for free from Halloween through to the following weekend!

If you’ve not yet read this tale of life, loss, regret and erm, grisly murders, what the devil are you waiting for! Head on over to Amazon and download it to your kindle or whichever device you use for your e-reading and get stuck in! I also have a couple of unsettling fiction shorts on this very website which you can also have a read of.

And, if you enjoy Whisper Wood, you can jump straight into the action of its sequel, Whisper War, currently available for 99p (or dollar equivalent) on Amazon as well.

So what are you waiting for? Get yourself some free Halloween reading today!

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Whisper War is here!

Whisper War is here!

If you read my last post, you’ll remember that Whisper War, the second part of my genre-hopping trilogy of novellas, was soon to be released. Well, now that it’s out and available on Amazon kindle I thought I’d tell you a little more about a man called Eddie Bleakledge.

He’s the protagonist of Whisper War, and if you’ve read Whisper Wood, you’ll have heard a certain Rose Constantine speak his name. He’s her older brother, and as we found out while following the life of that book’s main protagonist Frank, she spent most of her troubled days in Sunnyvale either wondering about his whereabouts or believing that one of her fellow residents was Eddie.

Well, it turns out that maybe Rose did know something we didn’t. We learned in Whisper Wood that Eddie went to war, but what exactly happened to him? And how does all this link up with those mysterious voices that we also heard from in Whisper Wood?

The story of the voices continues to unfold, and this latest chapter is filled with wartime drama and action as well as a generous helping of paranormal mystery. We join Eddie as he lives through devastating conflict, both on the battlefield and in his mind, and learns more about his purpose.

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It’s all in the edit

I finished my second draft of the sequel to Whisper Wood a while back, and subsequently sent it on its merry way to my beta readers with a slap on the back and a packed lunch. After a couple of polite nudges, it came slinking back, looking a little older and a little wiser.

One of my readers is exactly that – someone with a monstrous reading appetite who reads lots of stuff. He can spot a narrative that flows and good characters a mile off and anything that doesn’t work, he’ll see right away. The other one is very different, in that he reads hardly any fiction. He is however, a history teacher, amateur historian and published author and he really knows his stuff. I needed him to get this one under his microscope because there’s a lot of historic war material in it and if there’s one thing he’s clued up on, it’s war history.

Thinking I’d meticulously researched already, I was surprised to see some lengthy mark-ups on my returned proof. It turned out that though I had thankfully got a lot of things right, there were a couple of things I was a bit off the mark on. Problem was, they weren’t just the blast radius of a S Mine and the name of the first British tank. They involved some re-thinking and re-writing in a couple of places, which though not massive, were important, because I wanted to be accurate but not lose the narrative flow.

That’s why it’s important to have an editor and a second pair of eyes. I thought about which beta readers to ask for this book, because I wanted to be challenged on the authenticity of my war narratives. For the third book in what has now become a multi-genre novella trilogy, I’ll be asking at least one different reader again. Why? Because it’s important to get the right person for the job!

So, once you’ve got your readers lined up and are at the stage where you’ve knocked your book into shape and are looking for an editor of that second pair of eyes, just give me a call. Actually don’t. It may be night time here, or I might be in the supermarket. Just check out more about my editing services.

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Disengagement with Engagement

As far as self-publishing goes, the work really starts when you’ve finished writing. That’s because when we’re writing, there are no constraints or expectations. Well, maybe there are if you’re a meticulous plotter or set yourself rigid word count goals every week, or even day. But for pantsers like me who prefer a ‘write now, tidy up later’ approach, the writing period is very much about creative flow with few restrictions.

With marketing there’s so much to think about. It can feel so often like we’re screaming into the void. There exists a ReadingCommunity hash tag, but I’m not sure where it came from. Maybe it was an invention of the #WritingCommunity to keep our abandonment issues away?

For one thing, there’s the very fact that you’re trying to sell something, just like everyone else is these days. Take my last blog for example. It had my lowest engagement stats ever. Why? Because I was trying to sell a press release service. People switch off when they’re being sold to. It’s human nature. Being a salesperson is hard, and even with some background in social media marketing or even sales, you’ll still find marketing your book tough.

As soon as your first self-published child is born, crawling its way wide-eyed through the expansive Kindle book community, your in-box will start to get inundated with people and companies offering to market your book, get it to a wider audience or review it for you (at a price). They know that it’s hard to get your book noticed, and know that you’ll be desperate for help.

This is one of the reasons why I started by writing novellas. How soul-crushing would it be to have your 1000-page sci-fi space opera, which you’d meticulously plotted to the extent that it needed its own user manual, largely ignored by the masses, despite you offering it at a bargain price? This way, I can get my next book out quicker, and not spend too much time wishing more people had read the first. Also, having more books available is a great sales tool in itself.

I certainly self-published on a budget, doing the vast majority of the promo myself, though I did pay money for a professional book cover, which I think is really important. I guess it’s about how much you want to spend, and how you want to spend it. Don’t expect #WritersLift to sell your books on Twitter, but similarly, don’t expect agencies to generate loads of sales for you either – they have thousands of other clients after all.

Try a few approaches and importantly, log what works and what doesn’t. Giveaways are useful too. Not only will they get you books out to more people, but they’ll increase your chances of getting some reviews – even harder than actually selling. I’m sure there’s quite a few people with Whisper Wood sitting around in their Kindle library because they downloaded it for free. Do I wish they’d read it? Yes. Do I wish they’d review it? Hell yes. The important thing is though, one day they might. Forgive the pun, but books can have a pretty long shelf life and you may find people stumbling across yours years after it was published.

So, get writing, be proud of what you do and don’t give up.

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Do you review?

Ah, reviews. They’re the nectar of the gods as far as self-published authors are concerned. And not just the ones who write historical Greek fiction.

If someone has:

  • Happened upon your book amidst the millions of other self-published titles
  • Bought or downloaded it
  • Taken the time to read it
  • Been significantly moved to pass comment in some way

…perhaps then, you may receive that hallowed review. Proof that reviews are such a sought-after thing is clear to see. If you’re anything like me, you’ll have an in-box peppered with emails, often which start with the words ‘greetings to you’ or something similar, asking for a copy of your book for free so they can review it, or even more contentious, ask you to pay them money for a review. This is because people know we self-published authors value reviews, and as with anything that has value, it will be monetised. That’s human nature.

Whatever your opinion on paid-for reviews may be, the truth is, the real value is in a genuine review from someone who has bought your book out of curiosity with no other motive, and felt the need to comment. Personally, I’d take an ‘enjoyed it but not brilliant’ genuine 3 star review over a paid-for 5-star one all day long. It gives me valuable and honest feedback for one thing. That can show me things I may need to develop or things I can work on.

A positive review from a fellow author (who you don’t know!) is also super-valuable. It lets you know that you’re doing something right and the reader can see the bones of what you do, as well as the flesh you’ve spent hours grafting onto it.

So, whether you’re a reader, author or both, please take the time to leave a review. Glowing praise is obviously brilliant, but constructive feedback is ultimately more valuable.

Let me know what you think in the comments below.

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Resolving to write

Now all the celebrations have died down, one thing that many of us think of when it comes to January are new year’s resolutions. Whether that’s to exercise more, eat more healthily, or finally finish that book we’ve been working on for years. Hey, you may have even decided that it’s time to start that book you’ve been talking about writing for years. Wherever you are on your literary journey, the truth is, the overbearing, inbox-invading new year’s resolution is rarely your friend. But why?

Too much pressure
Well, it puts pressure and expectation on you for on thing. Now, I’m not saying having goals is bad, of course it isn’t, but choosing to start your book because it’s the time of year when you’re expected to make an effort can seem a little forced. You can still make a resolution, but just make it a bit more realistic. Something like ‘I promise to make a start’ or ‘I’m going to spend some time researching ideas.’

Break it down
The key thing is, breaking your book-writing process down into manageable chunks. There’s so much to think about after all. Genre, format, length, target audience, time, cost, artwork, promotion, marketing… the list goes on and it can easily start to look overwhelming. Just approach things one bit at a time. For example, you could say to yourself: ‘January is a quiet month. I’m going to spend a couple of hours each week throwing some ideas around’. Or if you already have an idea, try expanding it into a rough story arc.

Get involved
Even when you’re not writing, you can do a lot of research into the marketing and promotion side of things. Look on Twitter to see how people are promoting themselves, follow other writers, promoters, reviewers and businesses to get a feel for how it works. You’ll feel yourself getting immersed in the ebb and flow of self-publishing, and that can really help when you get going. Why? Because there are thousands of others who are on exactly the same journey as you and hearing about their frustrations and even successes can be helpful and insightful.

Just write something
Like many of you, I have a notepad of ideas and half-formed stories, some if which will never see the light of day. The important thing is though, I wrote them down. One of them I turned into a short story which just came out of one image that sprung into my mind, which I wrote down. Even if you don’t have an idea, just start writing something. Even if it’s a ramble, a blog like this or a journal, you’re getting yourself into the rhythm of writing, and that’s always a good thing!

So whatever your goals, dreams and aspirations for 2023 are, I wish you the best of luck!

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The Span part 2 (Dungeons and Dragons fiction)

If you’ve stumbled on this post because a conveniently-placed keyword, make sure you read part one first!
To everyone else, let’s see how this pans out…

Just for legal purposes, certain non-player characters and places named in the story are the property of Wizards of the Coast who make Dungeons and Dragons, but the character names are the creations of my players.

5 Hamlin

“But son, that’s not the life for us and you know it isn’t. I know you want to go off and explore like your friends have done, but well, not everyone is born to be an adventurer.” It was strange, considering he couldn’t remember a lot of the other things, that this fateful missive from his father was etched on his memory. The old man thought he was some kind of sage, a wise old scholar who others turned to for advice. In truth, Hamlin now realised with a bitterness that had come with age, that his father was nothing more than a failed wizard. Hamlin could see it all now he’d decided to step away from it and strike out on his own. His father simply couldn’t come to terms with the fact that his son had a passion to do something that he’d never been able to do – live a life through his magic. Oh sure, he’d cultivated a reputation for himself that he’d ‘been around’ and ‘seen things’ but in reality, most of that was vicarious living – transcribing spell scrolls for aged wizards and researching potions for shopkeepers. Hamlin’s mother had been more supportive. At least that’s the impression he’d got. The poor woman wasn’t allowed to have an opinion of her own most of the time.

As a young adult, Hamlin could now look back on those occasions with new eyes, when his mother had attempted to offer her thoughts and observations, only to be overridden by her husband’s assumed sagely knowledge. Poor woman. She was trapped and she knew it. You didn’t walk out on a marriage in the village, it just wasn’t the done thing. Still, its traditionalist structure had one thing going for it. It encouraged young men to go out and explore and find a trade. Unbeknown to his father, Hamlin had been studying magic too. He’d grown up with a house full of books, scrolls and potions and decided quite early on that he wanted to get involved on a practical, rather than scholarly level. Of course, he’d had to display some of his knowledge to his family, to show that he was studious, but as far as he was aware, they expected him to settle into a scholarly life and eventually take his father’s place. He’d turned it over in his mind for weeks, then finally decided that there was never going to be a good time to tell them, so he came out with it. That’s when his father has said what he did. His mother had sat quietly in the background, only once catching his

eye. That glance told him everything: “Go. Because I never will.”

So that’s what he had done, and here he was. Out in the real world. Whatever that meant. So far, it looked pretty much the same. Sure, he’d been paid handsomely by a farmer to frighten away a pack of wolves that were preying on his livestock (there were few substitutes for a good old fire spell) and got the odd conjuring gig at a tavern or two, but surely, there was more out there? He’d heard about Phandalin from a drunken old halfling who had been very appreciative of his performance in a tavern. In truth he hated lowering his skills to such a base level, but it was a necessity. It kept food in his belly and put a roof over his head, and importantly, taverns were a great place to pick up information. Apparently, Phandalin had a couple of good taverns and the rumour was that something “big” had happened nearby. As well as offering Hamlin some more opportunities to earn money, maybe this place could offer a little more? Maybe here would find the adventure he was looking for.

6 Riley

“Sabbatical? But what for? Surely you live a fulfilling enough life here?” Abbot Aluisus was incredulous.

Riley Pyrescream attempted to answer: “It’s not that, it’s just…”

“Your scholarly applications have been invaluable to us…and what’s more, you seem to have a real affinity for the garden and what can be gained from it. We face enough criticism for not getting involved – we always have – and well, since you completed your initial studies, you’ve managed to transform that garden from an old cluster of shrubs and forgotten flower beds to something we can use, and prove our worth.

“yes abbot but…”

“And of course, we’ve come to rely on you to keep us safe. Brother Aldred tells me there’s really nothing else he can teach you when it comes to the unsavoury but necessary art of self defence. And he should know!”

Aldred had been a soldier before he hung up his halbard, battle weary and tired of death. His calling, he’d told Riley once, had simply been a desire to get away from battle and all the talk that comes with it. Retiring wasn’t enough. There was always someone who would call on your experience. Even here, that proved true. Riley imagined though, that seeing off the odd wolf or wandering goblin was a small price to pay for the relative solitude the monastery offered. Then, there was the inevitable request that your knowledge needed to be passed on. As the youngest and most able-bodied brother, Riley had been encouraged to be the recipient of Brother Aldred’s knowledge. This involved some monthly training along with his regular studies, which at first the old soldier seemed reluctant to give, but it soon became clear to Riley that sharing his skills gave him a lot of satisfaction. And, Riley suspected, that wasn’t just because he’d finally found someone to pass the role on to.

Whatever Aldred’s motivations, Riley enjoyed the training and coupled with his limitless thirst for knowledge, it had given him the seed for an idea. The brothers were expected to take a sabbatical much further along on their monastic journey, so it was no surprise that the old Abbot was so taken aback.

Nevertheless, Riley gathered himself: “Abbot. I’ll be much more use to everyone once I’ve given my studies a degree of practical application. And just think of the knowledge I could bring back here? This monastery needs to stick its head out and explore once in a while if it wants to actually understand what’s going on and continue to be of use to people. I’m young enough to be the person to do that, and I’m more than capable of looking after myself.”

Whether it was because he was impressed by the younger man’s speech or had simply grown tired of the argument, Abbot Aluisus had relented, and here Riley was, in Phandalin. He’d overheard a group of travellers at a roadside inn, something to do with ancient magic and a cave, and that Phandalin was the nearest town. This was timely to say the least. He’d been on the road for a month or two already in search of adventure but when it came down to it, he didn’t know where to start. On his travels he’d seen passing parties of adventurers looking much more weathered and experienced than himself and had begun to have doubts. He’d been considering the prospect of returning to the monastery with his tail between his legs when he overheard the conversation. Riley had made his mind up there and then.

7 Kalistie

“Well, you know what? That’s it! I’ve had enough of you both telling me what to do, and enough of this place!”

Kalistie hurriedly gathered up her pack, which had been waiting in a semi-ready state for some months now, waiting for the day that her parents finally gave her enough grief to tip her over the edge.

“Kalistie, please. Just listen.”

Her father fixed her with his most earnest look, delivered from beneath arched brows that

showcased more of the elven side of his heritage than the human one:

“It’s going to take us some time to settle here. The people of Saltmarsh haven’t had many dealings with our kind. We’re not traditional seafarers. But what I have learned is that a lot of trade goes on here. The market’s a lively place, and you really need to start helping out now the business is growing. People pass through quite often and well, you know, adventurers are always in need of weapons. And there’s no finer weapon than…”

Sensing another of her father’s pride-filled monologues about the elegance of Elven longbows, Kalisti made for the door of their small stone dwelling, opening it only to be assailed by the now familiar – and increasingly resented – stench of fish guts, the result of this morning’s catch. Though she’d taken to her heels as soon as she got outside, she could hear her father at the door, shouting after her:

“One day daughter, you’ll realise that life is something you can’t run away from!”

She told herself not to look back. She didn’t want to give him any indication of doubt. She wasn’t becoming a downtrodden footnote to this place’s history, subservient to her father’s dreams, just like her mother had been. There was nothing for her here. A dead-end place where life kept going round in the same circle. To keep herself from going completely mad, she’d escaped into music; shutting herself away in her tiny room, constructing songs of escape and adventure. What she really wanted though, was some real adventures to sing about. Sure, she’d overheard people talking about what had gone one at that decrepit old house just along the coast from the town – something about an old wizard – but that was as exciting as it got around here.

The one positive thing she’d got out of this wretched place was the chance to catch a song or two from some of the travelling bards who occasionally performed in the Snapping Line. It was a lifestyle that intrigued her. Passing from one town or village to the next, earning enough to keep going, picking up tales, gaining experience and…well, seeing the world. That was something she yearned for, but as long as her mother and father had anything to do with it, something she’d never have the opportunity to do. Much as she resented them, she grudgingly admitted that the skills her father had taught her could come in useful, because she surmised, life on the road could be dangerous and it always paid to be able to look after yourself. Even her mothers obsession with boring needlework and crafts might help her clothes stand up to the rigours of the outdoors a little longer. She supposed on some level that she’d miss them, but as for this stinking place? No chance. She was never coming back.

8 The Cave

Most of what Gundren relayed to the adventurers was as he had told it to Kaldir, though the wily thief could spot the emphasis the Rockseeker brother place on his words, and how he deliberately locked eyes on certain members of the party when he mentioned treasure, the magical forge and weapons.

“So what about these wizards you mentioned?” asked the youngest male of the party.

Just as he had asked Kaldir when they first met, he now asked the would-be adventurers:

“Does the name Mormesk mean anything to you?”

Gundren looked around the party expectantly. This time, there was no recognition registering in their faces. The barbarian type seemed especially perplexed, glancing nervously around and appearing more troubled by the walls than by the prospect of encountering any magic. The female however, seemed to show more interest at this point than when the prospect of treasure was first mentioned.

“Well, as you may have already noticed, I’m a dwarf. Myself and my brother Nundo here knows all about what that cave once was. Like I explained just now, wizards used to work there with the dwarfs and Mormesk, well, he was the last wizard stationed there. The forge, the spells, and the weapons, everything was put to good use to try and give the dwarves the edge over the invading orcs but after the invading forces finally broke through, it was lost, along with Mormesk.”

“So if he died, what’s the problem?” asked the woman.

“Dying in battle leaves a soul restless, and when that soul once resided in one of the most powerful mages in the land, not even death can keep it from wandering.”

It was then that Nundo spoke then for the first time.

“It’s my belief that Mormesk’s spirit is the cause of all this. He’s down there in the mine somewhere and you need to find him.”

At this point, the younger Rockseeker brother rummaged in his pack, eventually pulling out a couple of parchments.

“I’ve drawn up a map of how to find Wave Echo, though that part is fairly simple. The other parchment shows a map of what we know about the cave. I’ve been in there myself several times, and because I spoke to The Gauntlet before they departed, I’ve got a good idea of the area they didn’t explore. It’s a pretty safe bet that’s where you’ll find Mormesk.” Nundo placed both rolls down on the heavy oak table that lay between the would-be adventurers and the dwarves, then looked expectantly at each of them in turn. Perhaps surprisingly, it was the barbarian who reached for the maps, glancing at each of his newfound companions as he did:

“I entered this town after crossing these very mountains, not by following the Triboar Trail that the rest of you spoke of. I descended into the foothills not far from the peak that the cave is shown to lie beneath, so I will lead the way.”

Whether it was that none of the party thought it wise to argue with a barbarian, or they were simply glad not to have to make a decision, they consented. Gundren seemed pleased that they had agreed to the adventure, and Kaldir felt relieved that his reputation remained intact. It was always a talking point in the dwarven community when one of their number chose a vocation that didn’t involve digging tunnels, mining for ore or smashing up boulders, especially when that

vocation was one such as his.

“Excellent. Then may I suggest that you spend the rest of the day exploring Phandalin and stocking up on any supplies you need? I’ve made arrangements at the Stonehill Inn, so you can get a good meal and bed down for the night when you’re done.”

The journey to the cave entrance in itself was uneventful, with just the odd travelling tradesman or two casting a cursory glance at the eclectic party of adventurers. Brom cut a solitary figure as he strode ahead in the stoic manner of someone who completely at home in the outdoors. The party travelled in awkward silence for a while until Cronos, not addressing anyone in particular, spoke up, inclining his head towards Brom:

“Strong and silent there won’t want to lead the way once we get into that cave, I grant you. But me? Well, let’s just say I’m used to skulking around in the dark. I’ll be glad of a little cover. We’re

way too exposed around here.”

After they rounded a particularly large rocky outcrop, they could see the barbarian hadstopped in his tracks to point at an opening about 20 feet in front of him:

“It is as the dwarf said. The entrance lies here.”

With that, the barbarian held out the parchments, signalling all at once that his part wasdone, and that he had no desire to navigate his way through the caves. The adventurers looked at each other, before Cronos took them from him, glancing over to where the narrow entrance was:

“Alright then. Let’s go.”

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